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Ice Skating by SarahBefish2013 Ice Skating by SarahBefish2013
You guys remember this right?- [link]
WELL LET'S FUTURIZE IT :dummy:
Lol it's Ice Skating now :XD:
IVE IMPROVED A LOT FOR SOME REASON.
AMG
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Critique by passion-for-partying Nov 12, 2012, 9:48:24 PM
Well I don't critique much; never really done it before, but here I go.

I really like the design of your character. She's adorable. I do notice the pencil's led and colors can smudge into each other. Maybe try outlining the sketch with a black marker, inking pen, or use same color markers or pencils to outline and create a "lineless" effect. The coloring is flat and not very bright, and it looks as if you don't spend much time on it. Perhaps you could color in a bit darker or put a little more time into it to make sure you don't leave some places uncolored; adding shading is recommended to give it a bit more.... how would I say this... "depth." As for the first sketch, try not to make the markings with the pencil so dark because you are going to need to erase them later for coloring, if you do color the picture that is. Make sure to erase any smudges so the picture looks cleaner.

Also, I like the shadowing effect you did on the ice. It convinces me that she is really standing on an ice rink.
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ArtgamerAndy Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconpatrickplz::iconsaysplz: I'm so cold that I'm shivering.
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CaseyDecker Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I wonder why Maria looks frozen in shock... :lol:
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AuBurneyT-Keswick Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Yay ice skating!
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Diebro210 Nov 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
very cute! :)
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Gamerbro014 Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome!
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*im sliding around on my belly like a penguin*
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